During class we went through and read a packet full of
poetry. The one thing about poetry is
how it rarely makes any sense to me. An
example of just how confusing poetry can be is with the poem on page 6 of the
PDF packet. Firstly, I don’t get why the
author designed the poem in that manner.
If I was to take a shot in the dark about the purpose of the poem, I
would say that a singularity pulls in everything and jumbles matter up. Maybe the author put the poem in that manner
to represent ideas getting sucked into a singularity (black hole). I do admit that there are times that poetry
does make sense, especially when it’s talking about a politics and social
injustice.
Dream Boogie really drove its point in the way Dream Boogie
was structured. I figure there is a
hidden meaning in the way the author chose the words like “ain’t you heard” or
a “dream deferred”, but since I don’t really know anything about the author I
can only make connection on my own experiences.
The author probably used the word “ain’t” to show a socio-economic
background of the kid talking to his dad.
The kid in the poem is probably from a neighborhood that has seen better
times. Using the term “a dream deferred”
was a really interesting combination since the term “deferred” means to
postpone, but since the author later uses the word “ain’t” the use of the word “deferred”
in interesting and seems to put more emphasis on how this kids dreams are
postponed. When I read this poem I
wonder what dream the kid had and why is it getting “deferred”.
Now when I read poetry, usually for a class, I imagine that
not all have some political agenda but are written just for a “food for thought”
manner. Food for thought is what I got
when I read the poem “And What Do You Get”.
The poem goes through and switches a bunch of words around to demonstrate
how easily a words meaning can change if certain letters were removed. For example, the author takes the word “therapist”
and asks you to remove the “the” and when you look at the end result you get “rapist”. The author even drives the point by talking
about the “id”, which is the instinctual part of a person’s mind (in Freudian
psychology). When I finished reading the
poem, there wasn’t any feeling of “wow that sucks or we need to change society”
but instead I had the feeling of “that’s interesting or yeah I knew that”. The reaction I had to the poem is probably
what the author wanted but since I don’t know the author I’m just guessing.
During class, we talked about what is a poem and the
different structure that go into making a poem.
While the class was listing off the various “things” that go into a
poem, I was trying to absorb all the different ideas since my major is
completely on the opposite end of writing poetry. The reading with Goldberg though really
helped to put into perspective the ideas of writing. The author mentions “Let it be known, the
earth passed before us. Our details are important.” When I read this, the pass
discussions in class started to make a little more sense. Just because poetry doesn’t make sense to
everyone, including me, doesn’t make it any less important. Writing in general is about trying to
understand or even record what’s happening around us and poems like “And What
Do You Get” kind of help emphasize that point.
Though in my defense, the understanding of where the various authors are
coming from, when writing poetry, would help immensely. The reason knowing about the author is
important (for me) is that by knowing the history, I can then put the poem into
context (or at least attempt to).
great, well done.
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